And
here again we have a first novel, this time fallen right smack dab into our
favorite genre and the one I should be constantly dealing with in the first
place, outright in-your-face kind of horror with plot devices and characters
and situations that grab you by the balls or region thereof if you have not
balls.
Bottom line:
Charles, our main character who from first person narrates the tale, is one
dude with wrenches thrown into the mechanics of his social life to the point
he’s disciplined his private thoughts against even the temptation of
masturbation. He’s just a joe with a shitass job and a clinically
malfunctioned jittery hand until a confrontation with a police officer and
his hound and the ghostly vision of a girl he encountered at a library
suddenly play a part in that hand coming to life, its palm a black hole of
fathomless vacuous suction with anyone it touches and, like a vacuum cleaner
set on nightmare, it sucks the life right from you. A frickin’ dog gets
swallowed up in it. And yet, all he has to do is touch you, and you’re dead
in a couple days, and those who touch you are dead in just as much time.
The girl from the library, as it turns out, is really a chubby blind girl in
Arizona who appears to Charles in visions while she dreams, and in that
vision she’s sexy and actually sees. She tells him a dreamer actually
dreamt this world, and the dreamer is awakening and everyone must die to be
saved…..or something like that…..and Charles is to purge this world
relentlessly by killing everyone in it. But then there are the many people
that dreamt of him doing so, and who fervently attempt to stop him. Not to
mention, throughout his exploits to kill mankind, his face is all over the
news. Ultimately, a popular televised psychic may be behind it all, but the
only way Charles can find out the truth behind the possibly greater role he
has to play is to continue down his path of global destruction and see what
happens next.
Calvillo has this, his first novel, as well as an extremely impressive
promotional campaign to launch him down a path to certain literary success,
if he keeps this up. I love hot girls that drive me to kill and
In 24 hours everyone you know will be dead! are splashed across
business cards and related marketing material are good catch phrases, but do
they measure up to all the hype?
You betcha. But I'm a redemption addict, and there are elements of the
story and the character of Charles which render me unsympathetic to him; the
focal point of firepower Calvillo directs towards us in first person with
him should, I feel, lead him into a more palpable resolution. But all
that shouldn't dissuade you from reading it, is just banter from me to the
author. I think the reading public who digs horror will lap this stuff
up.
Truly, its nonconformity, as Calvillo boasts as part of the sort of writing
discipline he's utilized to describe how he writes in author bio
blurbs, is indeed just that, and that's part of what makes this work
special.
That, and, for an English teacher with a dark side, I Will Rise makes
for a perfect addition to any library.